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托福寫作常見失分點

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在備考托福寫作時,考生們應該更加關注了解考試容易出現失分的地方,這樣在考試時才能避免出現失分太多的情況。接下來就一起了解托福寫作常見失分點有哪些。
 

托福寫作常見失分點


托福寫作常見失分點
 

1.用詞不當
 

學生們在新托福寫作中或多或少都會有一些用詞不當的問題,但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。
 

• In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
 

——problems應改為questions
 

2.拼寫錯誤
 

這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的誤打,而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。
 

• In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
 

——judgement應改為judgment
 

3.亂用大詞
 

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
 

這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題:
 

1)該作文題目是講學生是否應該做兼職,因此children的出現就顯得很莫名其妙;
 

2)although和but是不能連用的;
 

3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;
 

4.表達中式
 

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
 

句子中劃線部分的表達過于中式化。
 

5.表意重復
 

1)They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
 

前面已經提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。
 

2) The show is so compelling but attractive.
 

3)compelling和attractive是同義詞,所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
 

托福寫作常見失分原因
 

1.成分多余
 

• According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
 

該句中的shows that是多余的成分。
 

2.詞性混亂
 

• However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
 

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應該改成private和embarrassing。
 

3.時態錯誤
 

新托福寫作一般使用現在時態,除了拿過去事件作為例子用過去時態。
 

• Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
 

托福寫作常見失分點


托福作文容易扣分的地方
 

1.結構不平行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯接起來的時候,應當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。
 

2.不知所云例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
 

3.段落過長,不分段主語與動詞一致問題:She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語和動詞在數方面不一致。
 

4.句子別扭:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過長或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
 

5.不要使用縮寫在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而應當使用單詞的完整理式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
 

6.關聯詞語重復:Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語和主要動詞前使用連詞。
 

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